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Tears of Turmoil; Ashes of War

Poem By: Spe
Poetry


Tags: war, earth, pain, country, jesus

This is about some of the many horrible things wrong with our world and the cries the people call out. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 31, 2007    Reads: 46    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Tears of Turmoil; Ashes of War


This world we live in is forever dark

And has fallen upon the burned ashes of war
Every struggle leaving an eternal mark
How long until our land can’t take it anymore?

This world is soiled by pollution and affair
Drowned in a debt we can never pay
Most tell me, “Your sweet Jesus doesn’t care.”
Brings tears to my eyes every single day

Tears have shed, and many have seethed
We’re dying of starvation and infection
This world is so filthy, we can’t even breathe.
So cold by the loss of affection

Will someone save us? Does any one see?
This place, our home, our grave
Jesus, do you see the turmoil I see?
To destruction we’ve become a slave.


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I agree--I too worry about our world, but I do believe every age has had it's doubts--hope we aren't the ones to make it all come to a screeching halt--and yes, HE sees--and maybe cries too, seeing how we treat HIS world--sad isn't it ? --well written poem !

Posted: Jan 31, 2007

Author Comment:

It is very sad about how He may see what has happened to his creations and how so many people are sometimes forced to doubt in him. Although there still is hope, sir. I see alot of potiential in the upcoming generations and pray that we shall help His world for the better.
And thankyou once again for your comment.



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