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I wrote this, and then entered it in a poetry contest for kids. Middle school-high school students. It's about love, a break up poem as you can tell. Let me know what you think?

Submitted:Mar 3, 2012    Reads: 15    Comments: 0    Likes: 1   

When you met me I was broken
My heart was crushed
You made me believe you
I trusted everything you said
Most importantly I fell hard for you
You built me back up
Kept playing me along
Had me fooled that you actually cared
When really you didn't
You kept me around until something better happened
You brought me back down worse
I'm more emotionally damaged than ever
Beyond crushed is what I feel
You destroyed my heart worse
Now I have major trust issues, I won't be the same
I learned not to trust ANYBODY now
That they will end up hurting you
Yet I'm stupid because I still love you
You lied and I believed you
All to end it where I'm more damaged


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