He caressed me just like you are caressing me.
Oh, my companion!
I have you, my faithful companion.
You can give me far more than he can ever promise to give me.

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Submitted: May 19, 2008 Reads: 152 Comments: 10 Likes: 3
He caressed me just like you are caressing me.
Oh, my companion!
I have you, my faithful companion.
You can give me far more than he can ever promise to give me.
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This was such a lovelt poem. Very sweet and inspirational. I loved it! You have a realytalent here. ^^
Posted: May 19, 2008
i like it:] keep up the good work.
Posted: May 19, 2008
hi! sunset. it's a lovely mix of nature with the world. kutgw. ;-)
Posted: May 19, 2008
Hey nice poem. I never knew nature was mix love.
Posted: May 21, 2008
I love the rain, it rained while I was in Texas, but I didn't go out in it, was wearing shorts, and flip flops, plus it was pouring.
But I did afterwards, it smelled so nice.
Lovely poem.
~DarkFairy~
Posted: May 30, 2008
This was beautiful. The rain is awesome! I love it :].
Great job!
*~Mandy~*
Posted: May 30, 2008
I never thought of rain that way, although that might be the reason I love it. I liked how it tied love and rain, two things that most wouldn't compare, together.
Posted: Jun 6, 2008
WOW MAN!! you like made my stomach twinge like it always does when i think about love!! well done!! it wasn't corny or cliche!! I really liked it!!
Posted: Jun 19, 2008
Oh, what a sweet lovely poem. This was very well written I must add. Beautiful word choice, and it's filled with deep emotions. I can't wait to read more of your writing! =)
~Maple
Posted: Sep 1, 2008
i love it! the way you put you feelings in your peoms,it seems from my point veiw it comes naturely to you! great work!
Posted: Sep 29, 2009
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