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Companion Rain

Poem By: Sunset
Poetry


Tags: rain, love, sadness

A poem about the wonderful rain. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 19, 2008    Reads: 152    Comments: 10    Likes: 3   


Passionate, beautiful, intricate.
Your light caress sends me into a beautiful alternate world.
Your constant roaming all over my body,
Makes me shiver out of pleasure.
I close my eyes and twirl around as you wash over me.
As you wash away all my sadness and anger.

He caressed me just like you are caressing me.

He held me in his arms and I absorbed his warmth.
Oh, how I always used to cuddle close just to feel that marvelous warmth.
That marvelous warmth that I despise now.

Oh, my companion!

I do not need any of his lies.
I do not need his treacherous love.
I do not need the intensity of his gaze when he swore his love to me.
That imbecile that I once so adored.

I have you, my faithful companion.

You will never tell a lie to me.
You will never leave me.
You will always wash away my aggravation.
You will always give me true pleasure.
The pleasure of knowing that I am no longer tormented by his falseness.

You can give me far more than he can ever promise to give me.

You can give me faith and trust.
Because you are not a man like him.
Because you are my companion.
Rain.


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Comments:

This was such a lovelt poem. Very sweet and inspirational. I loved it! You have a realytalent here. ^^

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I guess I'll be getting into the poetry business huh? Lol.

i like it:] keep up the good work.

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! Oh and I just posted a new novel!

hi! sunset. it's a lovely mix of nature with the world. kutgw. ;-)

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!

Hey nice poem. I never knew nature was mix love.

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! Yeah, I just thought that I should express nature in that way.

I love the rain, it rained while I was in Texas, but I didn't go out in it, was wearing shorts, and flip flops, plus it was pouring.

But I did afterwards, it smelled so nice.

Lovely poem.

~DarkFairy~

Posted: May 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! It's been raining a lot lately where I am. Usually I'm not too happy about the rain because some plans are ruined. But rain is still worth loving!

This was beautiful. The rain is awesome! I love it :].
Great job!
*~Mandy~*

Posted: May 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!

I never thought of rain that way, although that might be the reason I love it. I liked how it tied love and rain, two things that most wouldn't compare, together.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. Yeah, I just thought of doing that and I like how it tied.

WOW MAN!! you like made my stomach twinge like it always does when i think about love!! well done!! it wasn't corny or cliche!! I really liked it!!

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot!

Oh, what a sweet lovely poem. This was very well written I must add. Beautiful word choice, and it's filled with deep emotions. I can't wait to read more of your writing! =)
~Maple

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.

i love it! the way you put you feelings in your peoms,it seems from my point veiw it comes naturely to you! great work!

Posted: Sep 29, 2009

Author Comment:

Thank you very much.



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