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Submitted: Jun 7, 2008    Reads: 61    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


4-Line Poem

Haku respected Lord Zabuza

For he gave him a reason to live.

And along with loyalty, he gave him his life,

Which was more than he had to give.


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Comments:

that's true..I cried when he died =[
lol

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Haku's wasn't really that sad, but Zabuza's made me cry.

haku
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hey that was not it i cried for both not like you

Posted: Nov 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Sorry, I just didn't find Haku's as sad, just when buz started crying. The only other time I cried...well I'm not gonna say, 'cause it's a spoiler.

amalia
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well i dont care what you two say i cried when Haku and Zabuza both died only to me Haku's was more sad than Zabuza's, so go ahead and yell at me if you want i dont care.

Posted: Nov 25, 2008

Author Comment:

(What a drag...)
Who was yelling at you? Doesn't matter who cried when, just so long as we both liked Zabuza and Haku.
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