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Submitted: Jul 24, 2007 Reads: 186 Comments: 12 Likes: 5
You are my treasured boy,
She said, the joy
Of my heart;
The part
That is my soul,
The whole
Point of being
And seeing
The sight of you
Each day if for a few
Hours or moment's touch.
You are my all too much;
The darling, the only one;
My kiss and tell; my fun
And life, my breath
And breathe,
If you leave,
You are my death.
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beautiful.
Posted: Jul 24, 2007
Love it. The structure makes it attractive and easy to read, very nice flow. It's sweet, I enjoyed it.
Posted: Jul 25, 2007
Loved it...It flowed reat form one line to the next....it was really sweet and beautiful
Posted: Jul 26, 2007
Beautifull work.
Posted: Aug 9, 2007
Wow...
That was amazing!
Posted: Aug 13, 2007
this one is VERY enjoyable to read Terry *
Posted: Oct 20, 2007
Hi terry, this is beatiful flow of words. Easy & nice to read and understand. Keep it up!
Posted: Nov 26, 2007
Great read terry Take care Juliet
Posted: Nov 27, 2007
Perfectly "wonder-full"..............Jerry
Posted: Nov 27, 2007
Very lovely and a poem I can relate to - excelent as always :-)
Posted: Nov 30, 2007
I felt a reverse oedipus complex undercurrent in this....or was that my cracked and jaded imagination.....goes to show u though how these poetic artifacts can work on so many levels...unintentionally sometimes...n'cest pas?
Posted: May 11, 2008
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