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Always and Forever.

Poem By: ThoughtlessClouds
Poetry


Tags: love, poem, romance, life

This is a poem i wrote to my valentine, and meant every single word.
Written: 2008 View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 6, 2008    Reads: 69    Comments: 14    Likes: 3   


If life was a cloud
On which I float,
You would be the sun, forever so close
Brightening every moment with your shining smile.
And also the moon
Enlightening,
Guiding the way when I’m lost in the dark.
If life was an ocean
Settled and calm,
You would be my boat, reliant and strong,
Carrying me in the right direction.
Life is not calm, nor a cloud,
It is losing your sight when there’s no-one around.
It is for these times that I hope you will be
My hand to hold, my shoulder to lean on, my friend.
Since we’ve been together
The sun has never shone so brightly
The ocean in my heart never so placid yet passionate.
To you, I wish all the happiness that life and love can bring
Just like you have brought to me.
I love you.
For worse or for better
Always and forever.


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Comments:

Wow, this poem was so beautiful! It has a really good visual, and I liked how you compaired things to others like that. Very creative. I really liked it, very sweet and caring. Excellent poem. ^^

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much!

Awww! This is so sweet! I LOVE it! It is REALLY well written too:)

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!

its sweet. written well too. love it

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Very sweet, very moving, I loved it. I love the term Always and Forever, I use when I sign cards to my wife. Thanks for sharing, Ted

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

oh my god this is lovely! Thank you so much for publishing this, I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work.

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, much appreciated!

hi! alex. when u love someone so deeply, u become poetic and the result is before us. superb. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :)
And yes, this was written when i was feeling especially close to him x

Wow, that is so touching, i love it. Your so creative and having good imagination by comparing you emotions with symbols of the nature. One love.

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, i really appreciate your comments :)

Oh! That is sooo sweet! You must feel really close to the resipiant of this poem!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

When i wrote it, i did!
Unfortunately, we grew apart but at the time he was really special to me. Thanks for taking the time to comment :)

yonaika
(not registered user)

my favorite poem of all the poems you posted!! totally! keep the good work!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

How sweet of you to say, thanks a lot!

Beautiful and touching. The powerful inspiration that love brings us is amazing. Great poem.

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, much appreciated :)

lol really good poem.

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks :)

wow that is so cool, you have a heart of gold, to have and to hold, good work. x

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, loving your style there :)

WOW! this so creative and beautiful and sexy and hott! i loved it!!! hope you and ur valentine r together forever! best wishes! ♥♥♥

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank yoou for lovely comment, though ironically and unfortunately, we've already broken up :(
Alex

it is perceived that some thing very special has gone beyond the clouds.but life is not only the cloud or the ocean it goes far beyond that,hope u get the silver of your life. it is these moments which keep u going in your tough days , am i right?
v.s.acharya

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

You are, it is incredibly true :)
Thanks for reading,
Alex :)



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