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This is a poem i wrote to my valentine, and meant every single word.
Written: 2008
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Submitted: Jul 6, 2008 Reads: 69 Comments: 14 Likes: 3
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Wow, this poem was so beautiful! It has a really good visual, and I liked how you compaired things to others like that. Very creative. I really liked it, very sweet and caring. Excellent poem. ^^
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
Awww! This is so sweet! I LOVE it! It is REALLY well written too:)
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
its sweet. written well too. love it
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
Very sweet, very moving, I loved it. I love the term Always and Forever, I use when I sign cards to my wife. Thanks for sharing, Ted
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
oh my god this is lovely! Thank you so much for publishing this, I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work.
Posted: Jul 7, 2008
hi! alex. when u love someone so deeply, u become poetic and the result is before us. superb. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
Wow, that is so touching, i love it. Your so creative and having good imagination by comparing you emotions with symbols of the nature. One love.
Posted: Jul 10, 2008
Oh! That is sooo sweet! You must feel really close to the resipiant of this poem!
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
my favorite poem of all the poems you posted!! totally! keep the good work!
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
Beautiful and touching. The powerful inspiration that love brings us is amazing. Great poem.
Posted: Jul 20, 2008
lol really good poem.
Posted: Jul 21, 2008
wow that is so cool, you have a heart of gold, to have and to hold, good work. x
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
WOW! this so creative and beautiful and sexy and hott! i loved it!!! hope you and ur valentine r together forever! best wishes! ♥♥♥
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
it is perceived that some thing very special has gone beyond the clouds.but life is not only the cloud or the ocean it goes far beyond that,hope u get the silver of your life. it is these moments which keep u going in your tough days , am i right?
v.s.acharya
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
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