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Submitted: Aug 27, 2007 Reads: 46 Comments: 2 Likes: 0
Emptiness
Frightening screams,
of broken dreams,
nightmares themes,
or so it seems.
Cold wind blows,
moonlight glows,
death shows,
on a blackened rose.
Sorrow sensation,
eternal damnation,
confused frustration,
in life's creation.
Eyes of black,
look back,
visual smack,
mind attack.
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wow! I really liked this, I loved how the rhythm.
Very well written- well done
Posted: Aug 27, 2007
This is a really interesting poem, the way it represents itself to me is as if it symbolises life. We live only to dream and dream only to have them broken while in the the end life is just a dark continuous cycle where our final rest is death. That just my perspective though. Well done with this one.
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Posted: Sep 7, 2007
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