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Where Is The End?

Poem By: Tigger003
Poetry


Tags: fear, pain, loss

This is a simple poem, written about a teenage girl's
battle with the feelings she has accumulated over years
of pain, fear, abuse and loss. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Dec 15, 2006    Reads: 59    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Here I sit alone, once again,My heart is barely beating,I am entirely consumed by pain.I feel like my blood is overheating,And yet my body says it’s freezing. Still these showers drench me more,All my fears rain down on me.The pain has sliced through my core,I am once more unable to see.Are the wounds meant to be sore? I could feel that I was hurt,Stabbing pains throughout my system. Sick of being treated like dirt,But now I’ve reached my friend,The one who is there to the end…Total numbness. Could I be suffocating?This strange feeling consumes me.Or am I still breathing?Yet again I need be set free.Am I really sick of crying? I feel like I’m losing my mind,Can’t go on living this way.I’m now completely blind,Can you see an end in the new day?I can feel I’m falling behind. My heart is being eroded,Slowly, I feel it wear away.I think it be better if it exploded,What more is there to say? And so I ask…Where is the end?   By: Lizelle Steyn31 August 2006


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Comments:

Very interesting and heart felt. If you still wanted to email you can find my address on my booksie home page, just click on my name. Tyrone.

Posted: Jan 20, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks Ty!

very very good!!! Very deep from the heart, i enjoyed it a lot. and i have felt that way many times too. great poem!

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

many thanks :)



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