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Loathing's Love.

Poetry By: tika123love

Loathing's Love by tika123love

Submitted:Jan 28, 2012    Reads: 11    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   

You were so cunning when you pulled

me of the shelf.

You said you loved me but you put my life

through Hell.

You only kissed me with those poison lies

You couldn't even look me in the eyes.

I thought that we would be an 'Us' forever

but you're never around. We are never together.

You only look at me through those evil eyes.

I wish you couldn't see through my disguise.

You have soft lips. And we could

kiss forever. To bad we will never be together.

Now my hearts broken and I can't find the pieces.

I feel as if now I am deceased and...you can't

replace all the good times we had, isn't it bad how I feel about you,

now I know the truth.

When I could swear that I heard you shutter.

You left me, yes, but do you really love her?

So the tears that fill my eyes are causing my pages wet

When I saw you I thought I had my heart set.......

On you.

To be continued...

Comment And Like If you like it!! Thank you. I might add more to this

But 'To be continued' Ryhmed and sounded good and fit perfectly. Any thoughts?

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