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The Daisies

Poem By: UncommonCold
Poetry


This is my representation of Sloth for my Seven Deadly Sins series. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 22, 2008    Reads: 33    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


You know, daisies smell quite different when you can only reach the roots-
Worm-ridden dampness instead of green chutes~
Just lying here rotting like I did every day.
Of all the ways to go, it should have been another way.
 
It could have been heroic,
I could have been a poet,
But I did nothing instead,
And soon enough became what I was doing with my head.
 
Instead, I just lay there-
Quite liken to how I’m lying in this coffin.
I did a great load of nothing far too often.

Now, I just lie here smelling the dank end of daisies.


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Comments:

wow. awesome! I love the daisy roots and all that. :D

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

-dances happily-
I'm so glad that I was able to entertain, even shortly.



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