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I wrote this one just last night, while I lay missing my Christopher. View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 17, 2008 Reads: 48 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
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wow. i mean, there are no words. at least none that could compare to what you just wrote.
this is beautiful, my love.
and he doesn't deserve you.
C:
Posted: Aug 17, 2008
deep. very deep. that's all I can say...oh, and, WOW. very good. geez, I'm almost speechless--almost. I don't think that will ever happen, but, with this poem, you've brought me pretty close.
Great job:)
Posted: Aug 17, 2008
wow,that's just. wow.... wow
Posted: Sep 15, 2008
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