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Punctured Through Silence

Poem By: undertheairwaves
Poetry


Its a poem I wrote right after I was listening to some music and had one of those intensely and painfully beautiful moments. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Oct 9, 2008    Reads: 22    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


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This beauty stabs me with its pronged angelic needles,

I am momentarily bereft of polarity; enraptured sorrows

caress and encircle me, in oneness of breath and exhalation.

My heart plucked lambently by this awakening, as an instrument;

delicate as a moment enwrapped in its own unfolding, it flutters:

breathlessly. Flabbergasted by its own reverberations and echoes.

Across celestial holes around me, punctured through silence

I feel its presence, radiant and mesmerizing; latency and anticipation.

Through the silent fabric I can hear the beauty smile, in exaltation.


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Comments:

Such a wonderful experience.
How one thing could turn beauty into sorrow, into joy, into music and then suddenly die out but eventually leaving all beautiful things as remnants.

Deliciously sorrowful.
Great write.

-Blacklust

Posted: Oct 14, 2008



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