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This is to provide Emily with some humor while working on her dissertation. Humor is not really my genre, so do pardon the silly sounding stuff. I wish I had the versatility of Jak to have fun with different styles. View table of contents...
Submitted: May 9, 2008 Reads: 75 Comments: 9 Likes: 4
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OMG! You are hilarious! That totally cracked me up! THank you, thank you! I don't know what to say, that was just awesome. I especially loved the line about my butt being in the chair because it is soooo true. I have these little stretching exercises that I do. The last line was the best though. So that's your real motivation, hmmm? Bwahahaha.
Posted: May 9, 2008
Glad to have been able to provide some entertainment. But you found out my real motivation!
Posted: May 9, 2008
This is so good and motivating...this is really really good.
EMILY needs a good humor and she needs to get all the love and Support.
Such a sweet poem.....
All the best wishes to Dearest EMILY and to Urja for writing this for Emily.
I loved the last line very much....
URJA U ROCK....
Posted: May 9, 2008
Haha! Excellent, that should do it! :) A great, funny read Urja! ~ Gypsy
Posted: May 13, 2008
Very nice and considerate and joyous, best of luck to Emily!! 15 thumbs up.
Posted: May 13, 2008
LMAO! oh, that made me laugh, haha. Good job, I hope Em listened to you, hehe:P
Steph:)
Posted: May 14, 2008
Ha! I know she's relieved to be finished and you probably gave her that last little push to finish up! Nice job.
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
Hello,
Hey Urja this was fun and quirky. Something refreshing and upbeat. I can't really be too critical on it because its for your friend. But i will say this, give it one more read, many lines are missing essential articles, you need to work on the grammar.
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
witty and obviously hit home where it was meant to . made me chuckle too .
not an easy task . i'm a right miserable old git .
terry
Posted: Aug 5, 2008
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