I'm the birthday boy

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Poem By: vahndelfire
Poetry

Tags: love, funny

It really is my birthday today and here is my birth day poem to myself yay me View table of contents...

Submitted: Apr 10, 2008 Reads: 52 Comments: 5 Likes: 2

look at me the birth day boy.

im to old to recive toys.

money and cash is all i need.

send it via mail indeed

if you have to send a cheek

id make it out to me in cash

please not socks or underwere.

last year sucked when everyone was here

and you came out with a book of pic's of me when i was little.

todays my birthday yes it is but i dont get no presents because im to old i guess.

or maybe cuz i dont wet the bed.

i did get one thing though indeed

my girlfriends love thats all i need...

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Comments:

Chicka19

Happy Birthday! =) Mandy

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thank u so very much

air

LOL!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT :-)

HAPPy BIRTHDAY..../katie

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

codys girl

I love you sooooo much *kisses and hugs*

Posted: Apr 11, 2008

Author Comment:

i love u to

Lionheart
(not registered user)

Hehe, sweet ending with the reference to your girlfriend. Sorry for taking an eternity to read, i've been really busy, but i appreciate you inviting me to read your work.
I dont personally celebrate birthdays, i believe in celebrating a life when they die, that way you have memories to be proud of. I dont like 'excuse days', like valentines etc.
But its true what you said, at this age we dont want people to give us stuff, we want them to give us the money to use so we can pick out what we want XD
Nice poem.

Posted: Apr 13, 2008