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I felt sad I guess alot of pain in my heart View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 8, 2008    Reads: 27    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


I held you to my heart as we walked together in the park our eyes met and we smiled I

kissed you gently you hugged me I gently slipped a ring on your finger your eyes shot open

 a man jumped out he grabbed your hand and took you from me

I cried out no but it was To late.

he took you from me and my heart with it.

 


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Ouch!! Good write!! 11 thumbs up.

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

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thx



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