Submitted: May 4, 2008
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i look at you and see the stars neverending blazeing love you and me are birds of a feather i look at you like bread and butter. i want to be with you forever you are my battarys i am your light you give my streangth to go on i give you my heart and will never stop i love you i love you i love you
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Comments:
I liked the poem, but without any line breaks it's kinda hard to read.
My guess is that the poem had line breaks when you wrote it in Word, and those disappeared when you pasted it to Booksie.
This is what i do: I write it in Word, and when I'm finished I save it as pure txt. Then I paste it, an voila, it's like the original with line breaks.
Posted: May 4, 2008