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why did you lie?

Poem By: vahndelfire
Poetry


what I want to say to my ex fiance View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 8, 2008    Reads: 31    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


What did I do wrong

Is loveing you a not enough

Or working forty hours which is tough

I gave you money and my soul

you gave me pain and nothing more

I loved you more then the sun

or the stars in the sky

why did you lie to me

when i asked you to marry me

you said i made you happy

but why do you leave me

please do say you still love me

because if you did youwould not hurt me

you turn my world up side down

and my mind inside out

you know who i used to be

yet you blame it all on me

yes i did do drugs and drink

but thats because the comforted me

I should of turned to the god that never fails

yet I decide to go to hell

I took sometime but im okay

I ask from you one simple thing

before someone says the love you

please don't make them go though the truble

of haveing to deal with the pain of loss

think before you act

and please one more thing

why did you lie to me

when I never did to you...


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Comments:

Painful and sad, but a good expression of feelings. Sorry about the whole break-up. I think sometimes people are not totally decided on what they want and just tell others what they think the other wants to hear....but they dont know they hurt them even more when they finally make up their minds and break hearts/promises.(did that make sense?)Anyway, it was a nice read!

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah it hurt me alot and i relapsed but ive meet a girl that gives the same feeling i had with amber



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