Afraid of what you'll think of me.

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Poem By: Vampire Angel
Poetry

Tags: love, emotion, feelings, confusion

This is about emotions and love and confusion a girl has been going through. But beware it's confusing to understand. View table of contents...

Submitted: Aug 19, 2008 Reads: 81 Comments: 15 Likes: 6

I'm shaking and can't stop.

When i look into your eyes i want to tell you but i can't.

Afraid of what you'll think of me.

I've had my heart broken enough times.

That now i'm scared to admit ... What i feel for you.

This feeling i have i've never had before.

It hurts me to know you don't feel the same way.

How come i feel this way?

I can tell you my most deepest darkest secrets.

But this one is to dark and deep.

You want to know so badly but it doesn't work like that.

I'm sorry.

I feel so pathetic feeling this way,

Feeling Afraid...

Feeling Scared...

Feeling Nervous...

You can be so Cruel.

But then again you can be so caring.

I don't know if we would work out.

It's crazy what a simple awnser to a question can do.

Saying these words

It's like i'm about to breathe fire or worse hear the poison of your words.

But i think i have to say it.

I can't help it but i ... Love you.

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Comments:

XLoX

It was kind of confusing at first..but the second time I read it.I started to understand..
its really good I liked it..
nice job =]
and don't ever give up on love :]

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah i wasn't sure if people would understand this poem. Thank you i'm glad you liked it. And i'll try.

Daemonic Resplendence

Wow.
This is so...I don't know. I think it is your best poem so far, and by the subject i think i can understand why.
It could be a song...

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

AAAWWW thank you that means alot. My Best? Thanks a song... i'll think about that.:)

Author Comment:

Thank you.:)

viper

I really liked this.It was really good.It's always scary and hard to tell someone you love them for the first time because your not quite sure how they will react.Great job.Keep up the good work.

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much for reading and commenting on this i apprecite it.:)

Truthdefiesreason

Excellent, i like when writers go above the norm. It shows where real talent resides. And i think you have it. I really like the format you came up with. Nice

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. That means alot to me i'm glad you think i have talent. Thanks for reading this and commenting i'm glad you liked this.:)

MelancholicXxXOptimist

___awww, this poem is sweet (in a way) gah; now im curious; whats the secret?!?!?! lol! keep it up

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. Ha ha sorry can't tell i'd have to kill you. Thanks for reading and commenting i appreaciate it.:)

Me Against The World

aww... so cute!

♥
xxxsomeone

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you i'm gld you think that. ha ha thanks for reading and commenting i appreciate it.:)

hey,great job on this one,i knw the feeling lol.....thanx for the warm welcome aswell,i think that many people will beable to relate to this poem,i know i was able to,lol, i had lot n lots of thoughs feelings....keep it up

xoxoxoxSweetness

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Than you i'm glad that so many people can relate to this. Thank you for reading and commenting i appreciate it.:)

Dark Skylight

Awww this is soo beautiful.
:)

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you i'm glad that you think this is beautiful. Thanks for rading an commenting.:)

XBrokenHeartedX

I didn't think it was that confusing. But it made you ponder a bit on your words. You used good imagery, like:

It's like i'm about to breathe fire or worse hear the poison of your words.

I really like that sentence. But I can totally relate to this, you know having been through it with Sean from school. And especially the part where you're saying, "i hate how you don't feel for me. how come i feel this way?" Either it's deja vu, lol, or I was talking to someone about this. About how somebody doesn't like you back, but yet you still like them even though you know that there's no chance left. I think I was talking about it with you actually. But that you still keep holding on because you still like them. Its weird to have feelings for someone who doesn't have them for you.
Ha Ha sorry I'm babbling now...my comments going to be the longest. WHOO HOO!!! But I really did like this poem Joanna, definitely a favorite. You picked a good picture for it too. Just remember to capitalize!!! HaHa:)

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks i'm glad it wasn't confusing for you. Yeah i like that sentence too. This poem can relate to so much people and that's one of the reasons i posted this. Ha HA yeah i think you were talking to me about that. It's fine i babble to it's fun. YAY! good for you! Thanks i'm so glad you liked this. I like it too and i will sorry i keep forgetting to do that sorry. Thanks for reading and commenting!:)

Agnesa Belegu

Wow. I can't keep my hand from clicking the I Liked It buttons. =] Love it.

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

HaHaHa thank you i'm really glad you liked this poem.:)

amira

great work and luv it everrrr so much!
muaxxx lots!

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

ha ha thank you. I appreciate your comment thanks.:)

dreaming of you

well if he doesnt get the message from this lovely poem , he's not the guy you obviously think he is . if he has'nt seen it , then send him a copy , one way or the other , you'll have closure .

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the advice. I APPRECIATE YOUR COMMENT THANKS SO MUCH FOR READING THIS.:)

XTillXDeathXDoXUsXPart

dont be afraid. most guys are afraid of hearing that stuff, haha especially in such a deep form. ur poem was good, very emotional and brought back a few memories. but ya, dont be afraid. fear is what takes u from life, and i agree with dreaming of you, on everything. great poem, sorry it took a while for me to get to your stuff. ur very talented:)

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Your right i shouldn't be afraid but it's hard not to be. Haha. Thank you i'm glad it brought you memories i hope good ones. Thank you for the advice i'll try. It's ok and thank you again for reading and commenting.:)

craaig

Excellent honest work. Don't stop.

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you so much for your kind words i appreciate you reading and commenting and don't worry i will.:)

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