letter from your murderer

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Poem By: Vampire Angel
Poetry

Tags: murder, death, letter, apology, sarcasm, evil

This was a class assighnment in 5th grade were we had to write an apology letter. I just thought i'd post it for the fun of it. Just beware since i wrote it in 5th grade well it's not very good. View table of contents...

Submitted: Aug 12, 2008 Reads: 61 Comments: 16 Likes: 4

Yes it is me the one who ate the last chocolate chip cookie from the glass jar.

The one who cheated from your test.

The one put spiders under your pillow

and most of all my personal favorite the one who punched you to death

I am oh so very sorry

But it felt so so good

Every body thinks you got ran over by a car or got bitten by a snake.

But that is not true i really don't know why i did it to you

But tell me what it's like up there in heaven if they have a pool with a big water slide

or if you ride on a hawk gliding the sky's

Sincerely,

YOUR MURDERER

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Comments:

SQUEEGEE

wow creepy but great. its really good.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? Thanks. Also thanks for reading and commenting.:)

Ant

hehe different, but i thought it was alright =)

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah it wasn't really one of my best but i thought i'd post it anyway. Thanks for reading and commenting.:)

XBrokenHeartedX

LMAO oh this was so entertaining to read Joanna! I had to write one of these in Hugo House, where you're writing an apology letter but you're not really sorry about what you did...ha ha this gave me a good laugh. Not a favorite, but good. Picture is definitely creepy, I must agree with Sean Paul, but overall a nice poem:D

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks and yeah i wanted the picture to be creepy.:)

dannyrules

lol that was entertaing and funni a little creepy but i liked it um can u read my story why does he have to be so cruel plz

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

ha ha Thanks and thanks again for reading and commenting i appreciate it.:)

rose89

hahaha! took the cookie! that was funny! this was creepy and good! oh the cookie line was my fav! hahaah!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

ha ha thanks and i appreciate you reading and commenting.

Truthdefiesreason

Heh, heh. Very dark. I likieee. kewl.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thanks.

viper

Wow sounds like something out of a Stephen King or Dean Koontz book.I liked this one.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you and thanks for reading it.

SomeoneCrazy

Awesomeness!! i like it!!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks i'm glad you liked it.:)

Daemonic Resplendence

Don't get mad...but i read it with a smille on my face, because I found that idea very cool and creepy!
It's very...original and the subject is really...
interesting!
I smilled because i like things like that...
Kinda strange, huh?
It's a really good work!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Why would i be mad? I had a smile on my face just writing it. I'm glad you thought it was cool and creepy. Thanks. I don't think that's strange cause i like things like that too. Thanks again for reading and commenting.:)