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Poem By: Vesta
Poetry

Tags: truth

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Submitted: Jan 27, 2008 Reads: 54 Comments: 2 Likes: 1

Truth

Trust

True

I beg upon those eyes

Do not lie

beyond those lines

Of truth you want, and trust you must gain

Do not forget

All lays in ruins infront of those eyes

If it is not true.

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I really liked it. It was short and had some confusing lines that got you thinking. Can't wait to read some more!
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Posted: Jan 27, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm happy you like it! And yeah, I'm puzzling.

Hmm ~Takes a deep breathe~ By reading this poem i see it is it should be seen, no hidden messages or subliminal versus, trust in the words on the page for they are the only truth there is to find, here its a plain and simple message indicating that this is no intricate puzzle meant to confuse the mind, its the fact that you are trying to find the deeper meaning that is confusing the reader, but if you read it for what it is you will see that it is telling not to look for any hidden meanings or subliminal messages, takes it as it is don't turn it into what you think... ~big breath~

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

Author Comment:

-gulps air- Well, part of what you are saying is true, the other 75% of my thought process of this was, that they [the t-words] may mean sort of the same thing, but they all have individual differences that make the word its own. Not just the way its spelled either.
-big sigh.
you analyze so well.