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Symphony

Poem By: Vesta
Poetry


Tags: symphony

So, I wrote this yesterday before I went to sleep. The things I write are extremely cryptic, my apologies.
At least they make you think :). View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 27, 2008    Reads: 60    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


 

It's a peak of life. <br>
The stripes on a  tiger, and the roar in the fight. <br>
It's that feeling you get <br>
When you look up at a full starry night <br>
as you hear words that are nothing but  <br>
the song that fills your dreams. <br>

Could coincidence be of importance? <br>
Could my vision make it worth less? <br>
Never. <br>
the only concern needed <br>
Is when it will take place. <br>
It has all to do with the tenderness. <br>
Relish in the chance to have something <br>
To have amity. <br>

To have cherished, <br>
is better than not to cherish at all. <br>


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Comments:

Interesting piece. I'm not sure I understand all of it, but then you said it's ambiguous.

Posted: Jan 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, thank you. *bows*

Interesting is indeed a word used to describe this... Written in my understanding as the point of view of in a dream, one thing is a cryptic meaning for another, its up to the sleeper (or reader) in this case to try interpret what is being said

Posted: Jun 20, 2008

Author Comment:

You are very good, and also very right.

Cool... It makes you think! I like it! what's up with all the s? All in all really good!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

I like it alot. It tells you something and leaves you to ponder on it.

Posted: Sep 6, 2008

Author Comment:

it's my forte



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