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Motherhood

Poem By: VictoriaD
Poetry


This is my personal story of my quest for motherhood View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 3, 2008    Reads: 106    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Motherhood

I thought it would be easy,

to start a family.

I was blissfully unaware;

my mind empty of pregnancy thoughts.

But it never happened to me.

I thought it would be easy,

to start a family.

I was excited at the prospect,

my mind full of anticipation.

But it never happened to me.

I thought it would be easy,

to start a family.

I was obsessed with other people,

my mind forever visualising pregnant women.

But it never happened to me.

I thought it would be easy,

to start a family.

I felt each day, month turn in to years,

my mind totally occupied with babies.

But it never happened to me.

I realised that it wasn't easy

to start a family.

I realised I never would,

my mind finally drifted on to other things.

And then it happened....to me!

Although it wasn't easy

to start my family,

I realise how lucky I am,

my mind is full of wonder and amazement.

It finally happened...to me.

And I am so glad that it did.


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Comments:

This is good. I can really feel your emotion-the frustration, the longing, and the excitement. Well done!

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much :)

Very nicely done. Good use and of repition and you tell a wonderful story.
matmoo :)

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for reading my work and for taking the time to comment. :)



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