(but)
i recoil inside
afraid
of loosing the time of the stars...
Cosmological lonelyness
when the last petal of rain
fall
over
incense love
.
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Submitted: Apr 17, 2008 Reads: 161 Comments: 3 Likes: 4
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Comments:
everyone recoiled then we'd all be alone!
how romantic, this sort of writing makes my heart pound.
i was thinking incense could also be nonsense because falling in love is so cosmically crazed. everyone ages. don't let that stop you.
Posted: Apr 17, 2008
lovely....voted for it
Posted: May 4, 2008
I love your words.
Alone, they are simple, but together, they're beautiful and powerful phrases.
Very nice poem :)
-N
Posted: Oct 14, 2008
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