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Submitted: Dec 7, 2007    Reads: 80    Comments: 9    Likes: 5   


I see you look at her,
With all your hopes so high,
Then I see you look at me,
With such disgust in your eyes.
To you she's just so perfect,
Flawless in everyway,
me, I am imperfect,
And I see this everyday.
It hurts so bad inside,
To love you like this,
'Cause I'm not the girl,
Who brings you much bliss.
I cry deep inside, 
'Cause the thoughts in my head:
"Your just to ugly,"
"You should be dead."
Im sorry I can't be like her,
But will you just see,
That I'm not as imperfect,
As you might think?
So just leave me here,
I'll suffer and bleed,
As long as your happy,
I'll die here in peace.


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waffles that is so sad if that is about u i am going to smack u! u r not ugly........... nor r u imperfect!!!!!!!!

Posted: Dec 7, 2007

Author Comment:

Ha! Ha! Your funny, but I won't get to much into that topic.

Well don't we all at times feel like were ugly and wish one was good looking but each of us has a special quality that no one can compete to and take away.
Every one is beautiful it takes time for one to accept themselves for who they are, and how they look like.
trust me it takes time.

Posted: Dec 9, 2007

Author Comment:

Yeah, I know. I'm working on my self-esteem issue. It's getting a little better and I know it will take time, I just wonder when my time comes.

Brilliantly sad. Very well written. Thank you for sharing.

Posted: Dec 25, 2007

hey, thats sad. it makes whoever its about seem worthless and you can tell that they don't like themselves. If its about you good luck. you need some love. I don't know if thats what you were going for but makes me look at my life and I'm happy i don't look at things as pessimistically as you. it's beautiful. ciao
ps: sweet name waffles how did you come up with that?

Posted: Apr 28, 2008

i love this poem and i know exactly how you feel!!! This poem is so touching and I think you are a good poet.

Posted: Apr 29, 2008

i really like your poem...i don't think anyone deserves to honestly feel that way. sorry if you do...i went through a time like that and if it is you and you wanna talk to someone you can always comment me on here and we can talk or w/e. but it was a great job at poetry and dude was right, sweetass name :]

Posted: May 12, 2008

wow...this poem reminds me of how i felt for this one guy a while back... ^^;; he turned out to be an idiot...if they don't know what they have in front of them, then they're not worth it...
great poem!

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

so sad, i agree with gigi, when guys are like that theyre either dellusional or jerks. i love your rythm and voice. i hope you dont still feel that way/

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

this was nice..simple.
ive felt like that.
i think the fact that
you are imperfect would
make you all the more special.
[[OB]] lyrically correct

Posted: Oct 27, 2008



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