i always wonder what's out there.
Don't you??
Great poem by the way!!

~~LeAnne :]

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

For some reason it reminds me of lazy summer days, laying in the grass staring up at the sky imagining what the clouds look like. Nice job! You're so good!

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

this is really good. It reminds me of the summer. :]
this poem gets me thinking.lol
great job!
*~mandy~*

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

sweet picture at the end! And the poem was very lovely, my favorite stanza was:

The happy times trickle by,

A gentle stream of happy contemplation,

The days that time always seemed to fly

With my future as my only explination


Very very good ma belle! thumbs up for you;)
Steph:D

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

i like it:] it is really moving. keep up the good work

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

i like it! i think that it is very good and well written. keep it up!!!

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

hi! wandiola. its refreshing to read about perceptions changing with the hue of sky. good work. ;-)

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

You spelled explanation wrong lol sorry i'm a spelling freak. other than that it was perfect i liked it a lot keep on writing.

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

This had become

my care free time

No worries or strife for me to call mine

Just a flawlwss sky.

And my thoughts simmering up high.

Into the clearless abyss

Of a deep blue sky.

loved these lines and YES Wandy....sky has always intrigued us always...right?? Even my son is attracted towards the shapes of the clouds ...I love the sky at night with stars twinkling and if luck would have it...i might witness a 'shooting star' as well....

beauiful poem....simple and sweet

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Aw, this is so lovely. It makes me think of the days with friends, sitting on the grass, no worries, no troubles! Good times! :) Thanks for reminding me, I really liked this. ~ Nixie

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Ahh...so refreshing... no worries and such just the sky and me... Great poem:) Love it:D

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

*too busy sleeping in the midst of summer grasses, dreaming of the sky above*

:)

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

"I can see clearly now the rain is gone
I can see all obstacles in my way
Gone are the dark clouds that had me down
It's gonna be a bright bright bright bright sun shiny day." - a song by Jimmy Cliff.

While reading your poem that song came to mind.

I notice the use of the colour blue to signify the peace and calmness of what the poem is saying.

i love the line that says
" No worries or strife for me to call mine
Just a flawlwss sky." wonderful :)

all the best... lexie

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Another poemz dat good. Hope i can future onez.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Very Nace
*nice
i liked it! awsome:)

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Beautiful! I felt like I was there. So much freedom, and I felt like I could fly. Lol. Great job =]

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

lovely sentiments beautifully written! It suggests a moment when u can let everything go and be still in your thoughts and at one with the universe.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

very relaxing, i enjoyed it very much!
my fav stanza:

Times filled with uttermost buoyancy

Times filled with untold pleasures

Life never seemed to disagree

With all my new found treasures

it is so intriging
keep up the good work!

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Very nice, keep up the good work....

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

I loved it...reminded me of me....great piece of art..Congratulations.

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Clear skies do remind us of lovely, happy times and your poem points this out eloquently. Happy writing.....Jerry

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Great poem. I liked it. The happiness of it cheered me up today. I really really liked.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

I love it. The sky's so simple but is so complicated. The sky really is 'flawless'; when you're in trouble, in need etc you look up to sky as if it were goign to take your problems away - It deoes nothing but circulates yet it solves so much and takes all the pain, stress etc away. And you're gifted, Wandy...God you really are.

Keep up the great work.

Olola.

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

We all feel happier when the sky is blue and the sun's out. Nicely put together.

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Nicely written...i thought it was flawless!=D___x

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Awesome poem! Great job!

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

very nice!!

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

This is lovely! :)
xx

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

that was an amazing poem, you have a great way with words lol.
keep up the good luck

Posted: Aug 16, 2008