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How Beautifully You Destroy Me

Poem By: Wayward Troubadour
Poetry


Tags: love, wonder, joy, youth, life, first

In my short life, I have found no force that can simultaneously cause so much joy and soy much pain as Love. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 30, 2008    Reads: 85    Comments: 6    Likes: 5   


It was an instant of forever

So wonderful and so calm

And so unbelievably simple

A dollop of Heaven’s balm

The sincerest touch

And a stolen breath

So fearful of life

But so afraid of death

And how beautifully I destroyed you,

How beautifully you cried,

How beautifully you whispered my name

Just after the sunrise

You went to sleep afraid

Afraid that I’d be gone

But I promised you always

To be on the other side of dawn

So dark but for moonbeams

So alive you thought you’d died,

And trembling softly

Your heart shaking inside

So infected with wonder

And so foolishly amused

And so awfully in love

And so willingly confused

A gentle touch

And holding so tight

Your flower-petal lips

So soft and light

And how beautifully you destroyed me,

As we shared a soul

And how beautifully we break

To become so beautifully whole

 

 


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aww that was beautiful!

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! That was kind of what I was going for ;)

I amm touched with ur sensibility and sensitivity...now this is passionate...

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. I usually write a poem when I'm feeling rather strongly about something, so I try to put the feeling into words as best I can so that readers may understand that same sensation. If I achieve that at least in part, I think the piece has done its job, so thanks for your comments and the read! :)

Oh. My. God.
Intensely beautiful.
Speechless with your poem.
True to life, it hits hard.

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Author Comment:

It is truly humbling to receive such kind words from a skilled poet like yourself. I was up late one night thinking and just let myself think and wrote the words that had been bouncing around in my mind all that day, and this was the result. It's my personal favorite of my poems, and I guess that kind of shows :). Again, thank you for reading and feeling something from it.

Wow! That was great!
Well done! :) I could really feel the emotion in this poem. I'm a big fan of good poetry, and I think I just found some ;)
It was truly beautiful.

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey thanks! I'm glad you liked it :). I appreciate you taking the time to read it and share your thoughts!

OMGoodness! That's honestly one of the most beautiful poems I've read. I feel kind of silly saying its "beautiful" because it really is beyond that. Wonderful job!

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Lacey! I'm glad you liked it :). Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

Hei!

This suuch a lovely poem!!XD
Very touching! And I felt the emotions too!!XD

'I like it' voted!!^_^
Great job, and keep on writing!!XD

Posted: Aug 15, 2008



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