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Fallen Star

Poem By: WhatIsInAName
Poetry


a simple poem.
Just me trying to write about myself haha :)


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Submitted: May 10, 2008    Reads: 70    Comments: 7    Likes: 2   


I am the fallen star!

The Broken Wing!

The Shattered heart!

The Shattered string.

I am a sleepless dream. 

A contorted but melodic song. 

A buzzing that you learn to love. 

A space of dark, mystery.


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Comments:

you describe yourself very well if indeed that's how you are. it always hurts to have your heart shattered..

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

haha Im an idiot I just realised there this is how you reply xD

thanks alot :D

that is very true :(

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Very mysterious, almost like a riddle. I give up, what are you? heehee
Your Book Loving Friend
bibliophile

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thanks :P

Oh yes :P

well that would be telling wouldnt it ;)

thanks for checking out my stuff :P
xxx

I really liked it! no joke! great way to descibe youself! please cum chek out some of my stuff!! all mhy love!

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey :D
thanks alot :)
I'll deff take a look :)

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hey great stuff. i love quick sharpe poems like this..but above all you are a poet!!

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thank you :D

very nice description!you sound awesome haha

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

haha thank you.

I like to be cryptic :P

If only all people thought that way haha

very good
i like it :)
good discription of you ...

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks :)

"A buzzing that you learn to love"
what a wonderful melodic poem. Keep buzzing fallen star your writing will draw followers I am sure.

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!
I hope so ^-^
xxx



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