I am the fallen star! The Broken Wing! The Shattered heart! The Shattered string. I am a sleepless dream.
A contorted but melodic song.
A buzzing that you learn to love.
A space of dark, mystery.

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a simple poem.
Just me trying to write about myself haha :)
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Submitted: May 10, 2008 Reads: 70 Comments: 7 Likes: 2
I am the fallen star! The Broken Wing! The Shattered heart! The Shattered string. I am a sleepless dream.
A contorted but melodic song.
A buzzing that you learn to love.
A space of dark, mystery.
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you describe yourself very well if indeed that's how you are. it always hurts to have your heart shattered..
Posted: May 10, 2008
Very mysterious, almost like a riddle. I give up, what are you? heehee
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Posted: May 12, 2008
I really liked it! no joke! great way to descibe youself! please cum chek out some of my stuff!! all mhy love!
Posted: May 15, 2008
hey great stuff. i love quick sharpe poems like this..but above all you are a poet!!
Posted: May 15, 2008
very nice description!you sound awesome haha
Posted: May 16, 2008
very good
i like it :)
good discription of you ...
Posted: May 21, 2008
"A buzzing that you learn to love"
what a wonderful melodic poem. Keep buzzing fallen star your writing will draw followers I am sure.
Posted: Jul 10, 2008
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