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DREAMS OF THE UNJUST

Poem By: whitehart
Poetry


Tags: dreams, unjust

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Submitted: Jul 9, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 7    Likes: 2   


DREAMS OF THE UNJUST

We dream of a world
A peaceful place with no war,
A place where all are full and none hungry,
A place full of love, and care, and commitment
A place not tainted by the injustices of the world
We dream of a world so perfect
Yet we are the creators of its imperfection.


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Comments:

Short, sharp and to the point.

Phil

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment Phil

hi! deb. that's why v all blame bush. feed in "failure" in google and his name crops up. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

hahahaha...

You just hit the bullseye, Deb! ^^

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Jadey, glad you liked it. Take care ~

no beating about the bush...short, sharp, intense and PERFECT

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks again mate. :)

staright to the point! love it:)

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks mate.

runereader
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Just gets better..nugh said!

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Gee...thanks. Someone had to say it....lol :)

i read this again...and how i wish i could make a difference...i think we all can make a difference..in our own little little ways...what say honey???

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

I think so too. Every little bit counts....all that is needed is commitment. Of course and the unjust to become just!!!



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