Some secrets are better left undiscovered,
See the pleasure your presence there gives me,
Embrace the image of you I carry in my heart,
The compartment full of love and adoration,
See the beautiful image of you engraved there,

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A look into the thoughts of a cheating man.I am in a horrible mood. I guess this poem reflects the negative mood am in. View table of contents...
Submitted: May 26, 2008 Reads: 60 Comments: 7 Likes: 5
Some secrets are better left undiscovered,
See the pleasure your presence there gives me,
Embrace the image of you I carry in my heart,
The compartment full of love and adoration,
See the beautiful image of you engraved there,
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Well Deb, just so long as you are enjoying yourself
Posted: May 26, 2008
I find this rather sad..someone who gives all and comes to recognise that to accept love with conditions attached is a false love..sad..very sad.
Posted: May 26, 2008
So sad .....I am so sorry for the person who has to go through this trauma.
Posted: May 26, 2008
Well done, Deb! I enjoyed this poem very much. More than sad like the others found it, I found this to be sarcastic and 'bitchy' and a woman looking for revenge by telling her cheating man that he's not the only one in her heart as he may presume! I guess that is sad in its own way but I like the fighting spirit and it works well within the structure of your poem!!
Happy writing.....Jerry
Posted: May 27, 2008
Another great poem! My favourite lines were "...Walk in and look around,/ Try not to walk into the dark corners..." because it is like he's so false and even though on the surface he's acting open & honest underneath it all he's warning her not to look for the darkness she knows is there. Almost as if he's asking her to deliberately stay ignorant to his betrayals. To be content with a half-love; half-life.
Anyway, I am going to stop rambling to you about the meaning of your own poem and end with: Great job!
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
I like this poem, and I think it was well written. It reminds me of a friend I've had for years. She speaks of her love so freely as if its real, but her and her husband both have played for years without end, with each others heart.
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
YOUR DAD??
I AM SURE YOU WOULD HAVE HATED HIM BEYOND WORDS....
I SALUTE YOUR MAMA FOR TOLERATING HIM FOR SO MANY YEARS...
I AM SURE SHE IS HAPPY NOW....AMEN !
GOD NEVER FORGIVES THE PERSON WHO BREAKS A LOVES FILLED HEART AND SOUL....
Posted: Jun 16, 2008
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