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Poem By: William Ketamine
Poetry


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Submitted: Mar 23, 2008    Reads: 38    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


absurdity

I’d tare my lungs apart in a harrowing scream.
I’d rub my fists sore, worn out with suffering.
I’d grit my teeth together and splinter the enamel.
I’d scatter the pages of a likeness;
of an illusory novel.
just to break into you.

vulnerability

I’ll revel in this reclusion
isolate myself from false conclusions
and to think that the only pusher,
you,
were my uneven illusion.

lack of character

burdened by your intrusion
I choke on my own confusions
and put myself out to infusion
as you remain..
an unaffected allusion

fiction

reality is as transparent and primary
as you and me could be
possessed real.


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Interesting concepts

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Yes, poewhit tis' very very interesting:)
(sorry if i'm rude but I dont get it...)

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

certainly you're not rude.
why, if you simply don't understand something it doesn't mean you're rude, does it?
thank you for the feedback (if we can call it one).



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