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but you said forever

Poem By: witch fang
Poetry


Tags: sad, teen, romance, love

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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 33    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


At first i just stood there

alone

waiting

i didn't know what for

now I relise it was you.

Looking back

I realise that they said you'd make me cry

that I was better off without you

now I get a chance to try.

I didn't want to see it

though i'm sure now thatI allways knew

And even though you said forever

I remember feeling as if it wasn't true.

The way you looked at me

the way you spoke

How could I know

you spoke to her that way as well

dont tell me that I should have known.

I knew I did

I didn't want to

I pretended that I couldn't see

and every moment

you were slowly slipping away from me.

Know I know you said forever

And once upon a time

I believed it too,

but nothing lasts forever

And certainly

not me and you.


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Comments:

Ooh wow, this is really good. I can almost feel as if I'm the girl in the poem, almost feel her pain. Great job! :) I'm going to look at your other poems in a little bit, too!

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow. Cool!
Try my novel if your up for it. Though I warn you that its a little...um.....wicked? Yeah. thats it. And i'll read your too.

wow!! dat was really um awesome... it kind of reflects how i felt after he dumped me... i really liked it...

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

OH. So sad.
Dont be! He was and still is a major freak.
I feel ur pian but be happy, kay?
*+*Peace*+*

oh...
someones been in luv b4
but who cares mayn guys are fish
theres plenty more in the sea
and one wid your name on it
cheer up
'don't worry b happy' is wat my uncle bob will say
:)

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

You know my uncle? cool! Thanx for commenting:)
*+*Peace*+*



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