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your just like glass

Poem By: witch fang
Poetry


Your just like glass is kind of a spur of the moment thing. But i hope you like it. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 23, 2008    Reads: 18    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Your just like glass

The way you look

so fragile

yet so beautifull

you sound so natural

when you speak to a crowd

Your just like glass

the things they say

the secrets

the rumours

the insults

slide off your surface

like water

your just like glass

the way you act

stronger then they you give you credit for

perfect

resistant

you play your part

and they play theirs

every one thinks your a godess

And just like glass

I

can see right through you.


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Comments:

Wow, that's very powerful. I've never thought to compare some people like that to glass..that's a very unique and true comparison. Great job. :)

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? thanks. That's really...(gulp)...nice.
Coming from an ice queen it's really hard to say.

this is wonderful it is so graceful it makes me wanna...

PUKE got ya sis.

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

I HATE YOU!!!!!
And I will crush you ext time you come on my page.



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