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Submitted: Mar 25, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


A secret that’s never been told
A secret sitting in my soul
A secret that’s buried deep
If you ask, I won’t say a peep
I’m afraid how you’ll react
When I tell you, my secret is a fact
Would you hold my hand?
Would you understand?
That this secret is tearing me apart
Not telling you is breaking my heart
I’m sorry but this secret I cannot say
Maybe I’ll tell you some other day

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If I were rich
I’d travel to new places
If I were rich
I’d see lots of new faces
If I were rich
I’d have a big pool
If I were rich
I’d live someplace cool
If I were rich
I’d own my own candy store
If I were rich
My life wouldn’t be such a bore

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 Chocolate is tasty
Chocolate is yummy
Chocolate is better
When it’s inside my tummy

 Chocolate is bitter
Chocolate is sweet
Chocolate smells better
Than my brothers feet

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Comments:

Interesting selection of poems.
Sometimes secrets are better out than in. Especially if it is tearing you apart. (just an observation from experience)
keep writing.

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Author Comment:

yea. thnx for da comment :D

Poem is full of alot of dreams

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Author Comment:

yep

Hi. The last line of the Choc poem really made me laugh!! Keep on with the writing. Ricky.

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

yeah it made me laugh to when I read it after writing it. But it is true my little bothers feet does smell bad especially when he takes his sneakers off. Thanx for the comment! :D

Wonderful poetry. Your do have a great talent and it is great to have you share it. Keep it up. Great job. :)

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx



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