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A new take on an old toy. Don't you ever wish you were an Etch-A-Sketch? View table of contents...
Submitted: Feb 25, 2008 Reads: 96 Comments: 5 Likes: 2
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Amazing. Sometimes in life i totally feel like that... Just go back and erase somethings... but the best is you can always use the Etch-A-Sketch to create new, and better events in your life.
(and i bet you anything in 5 minutes im gonna go find my Etch-A-Sketch and start doodling on it lol)
Posted: Feb 25, 2008
Ah yes, wouldn't it be great if you could just erase all those mistakes, bad times etc. and replace with the fresh and new. Creative poem.
Posted: Feb 25, 2008
****I JUST STOOD ON MY HEAD******. Brought back some memories
Posted: Feb 26, 2008
I loved this piece. It was so real and raw and nostalgic. One of the best metaphors I have come across in a long time. This poem was a beautiful conversation- it felt so personally written. Much inspired and very well done.
Take Care.
Posted: Mar 3, 2008
So, we all stand up and shake a little to see if your metaphor works....meehee! (darn...it didn't)...dreams slip away? no way! you make new dreams then! like your etch-a-sketch.
Fun poetry sir.
Posted: Mar 11, 2008
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