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If i couLd Freeze The MoMeNt(a Loser poem)

Poetry By: Wu Lang
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This is a Loser poem in my other site...just want to know more...how Loser this poem is...it was written in the Philippines but it happened a long time ago.


***Feedback-Critique-is welcome***


Submitted:Jan 20, 2012    Reads: 22    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


every time i'm missing you
i just hate to know that your ain't around
and to the place where i go
i'm aching knowing you're nowhere to be found

and when my sight caught you
we exchange hello's and how do you do
give you my sweetest smile just out of the blue
have you ever notice my slightest clue?

if i could freeze the moment dear
i want to see the look in your face
each time our distance become so near
how your eyes simply shine when i plant you a kiss

i wanted to rewind your voice and play it again and again
each words that comes from you how i love to listen
and how you speak my name
every time you saw me coming
if only i could freeze the moment, darling

the time you hugged me tight
whenever you at my side whether your in my left or right
i could smell your sweet scent
i could feel the warmth of your breath
wish i could freeze the moment...





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