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White Sandy Shore...

Poem By: x Electricity x
Poetry


A poem I wrote after inspiration from a friend. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 18, 2008    Reads: 70    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


I lie on the ground,
and stare into space,
the stars start to move,
into the shape of your face.


I see you there now,
looking down at me,
with that cute little smile,
that I like to see.

You say "close your eyes",
"tell me what you see",
I see only two people,
just you and me.

We're walking the shoreline,
with our feet getting wet,
the horizon turns pink,
as the sun starts to set
.

We make love through the night,
on that white sandy shore,                      
then I hold you while thinking,
I could want nothing more
.

Oh I wish I could be,
in that one special place,
as I lie on the ground,
and I stare into space...



Let me know what u think...yknow.


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Comments:

woo its great!! loving it! x

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, thanks ali!

Very cool. I love it.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, =]

NIce.. very romantic.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, should be more of that soon.

:) Nice and romantic. Hope to read more of your poems.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks



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