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Legacy of Life

Poem By: Xanado
Poetry


Tags: son, pride, honest

A real achievement in life, the raising of a loving, honest and industrious son View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 9, 2008    Reads: 52    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


By what measure can one judge a life

By wealth, riches or lack of strife

To look back at things not having done

Or acquiring things yes on and on

I see no joy in this attained

I have no pride in material gained

Instead my pride it lingers on

In the guise of my only son

He is true and honest as can be

A gentleman of life that is he

So when I kneel before my god

And he asks me just what I’m worth

I’ll take my hand and point with joy

To my one and only loving boy


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I have no pride in material gained
Instead my pride it lingers on
In the guise of my only son

I loved this part , I think it define very well the essence of this poem. Great work!

Posted: Feb 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you your comments mean a lot.

Hello Xanado :) it is nice to read you again*
this is a very sweet poem full of love, a pleasure to read...katie

Posted: Feb 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for those kind words. I dont have a lot of time for this at the moment, I only seem to turn my machines on for e mail and updating these days. Kind regards J.



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