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Random rhymes that I just put together. It's not a fantastic piece of poetry, but I'm happy I at least rhymed a little for once. (:
Comments or criticisms are welcomed! Some advice would help too! ;)
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Submitted: Aug 20, 2008 Reads: 96 Comments: 14 Likes: 3
This is just some random rhymes that were in my head, so yeah. It sounds pretty cheesy and corny, but oh well :) We are all here to improve anyway.
Personal Emotions
Let the rain fall down,
For love is gone,
Let the rain fall down,
Since my heart is torn.
Stars In The Sky
The stars shine brightly,
Up in the sky,
Where up so high,
No one can cry.
A happy place,
The place to be,
To share our love,
Just you and me.
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Simple but nice and cuddly
Posted: Aug 20, 2008
I like Stars in Sky a lot:) I used to write rhymes some time ago:P now I'm thinking that I should tsarts again:D well keep it up!
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
start*
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
a bit cutesy but sweet.
Though I can hardly talk I can't rhyme.
-Monotony
Posted: Aug 23, 2008
Ooh, she writes poems now! Nice. Short and sweet little things they are :)
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
aw, simple, cute, and happy! i liked it alot :]
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
hi! cher. two beautiful verses. only rain can calm heated emotions. and there are two bright stars in the sky - the two lovers. this is simply superb and soulful. keep it up. lol. ;-)
Posted: Sep 7, 2008
Gave it an I like it because I did
Posted: Sep 11, 2008
These are wonderful and very creative.
Posted: Sep 12, 2008
This is quite nice. Keep on truckin'
Posted: Sep 17, 2008
Not bad at all! Keep it up and crank out some of that poetry.
Posted: Sep 24, 2008
They were cute.
It's hard to rhyme.
I think I'm "Queen of Corniness".
Posted: Sep 26, 2008
"Stars in the sky" Was so cute. I loved it darling. Keep up the writing
peace nd love
Posted: Oct 28, 2008
"stars in the sky"...simple but lovely.
Posted: Nov 15, 2008
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