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Behind The Curtains

Poem By: XBrokenHeartedX
Poetry


I'm not who you think I am.
I'm not the girl that everyone sees in the spotlight.
You don't want me.
Not when you see who I really am.
Don't pick me.
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Submitted: Jul 28, 2008    Reads: 69    Comments: 9    Likes: 4   


Everyday is a simple day,

In the life of the masked image,

But behind the scenes,

You would never believe.

 

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In the spotlight she’s a queen,

Her pampered self a high rank in the royalty,

But after the curtains close,

Just wait and see.

 

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Her hair a shimmering blond,

Her eyes a glistening amber,

A perfect life in the eyes of her peers,

But a disaster when reflected in the mirror.

 

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She’s like a celebrity behind closed doors,

A masterpiece hung on the great walls,

And all he sees is that piece of art,

And thinks that he understands her heart and soul.

 

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But little does he know,

That her heart is broken,

That those shards of glass pierced her,

And inside she bleeds to no end.

 

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But little does he know,

That her soul has been put in flames,

That all those times she’s made a mistake,

Inside she breaks into a million pieces.

 

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In only the blue light can you truly see,

The catastrophe behind the masterpiece,

In only the blue light can you truly see,

The girl who bleeds eternally.

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He doesn’t realize the hope he gives her,

How he mends her back together, piece by piece,

And how maybe once she’s fully repaired,

She’ll be who everyone thinks she is.

 

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But one day he just can’t help himself,

And after the show opens the curtains,

And everyone in the audience turns to see,

The girl they thought was different.

 

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Displayed is her broken heart,

Her flaming soul,

Her tears that run with no end,

And the mistake that she became.

 

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But she is welcomed with no surprise,

And most by the boy she thought would throw her away the most,

This piece of trash she thought she was,

Was just what everyone knew was behind the mask.


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In only the blue light can you truly see,
The catastrophe behind the masterpiece,
In only the blue light can you truly see,
The girl who bleeds eternally.


i freaking LOVED that stanza lol i read the poem through a couple of times, and every time, that stanza just stood out to me.
this was so beautifully written zoe!!
i'm so glad to see a new poem from you :D i love your poems! ^^
keep up the lovely writing hon!

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL, I was like I want to update something! But I didn't feel much like writing a new chapter, so I was like it's about time I wrote a new poem! Ha Ha I'm so glad you liked that stanza! I didn't know if people would get the whole blue light thing so...ya:) Thanks so much for reading and commenting Alice, it's so nice to hear that you enjoyed it:D

The poem perhaps defines the masquerades of actors and actresses.
Truly they have souls
But none to show their real face.

These people are hollow and thin,
attached to the strings of the people who adore their every move.
They have no control of their lives

and when finally should they be noticed?
You have gathered their emotions well zoe.

Nobody's perfect.
Perhaps some think the others are.

Good poem zoe.
Keep writing. ^^

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Punishment! Ha Ha I actually meant the whole curtain and stage thing to be a metaphor, but I like yours better:) I do completely agree with you. They're like puppets. Thanks again, and I'm glad that you enjoyed the poem!

Wow, that was really interesting and well-written. You don't really think that everyone else is totally faking it like you are, but really, you're not fooling anyone! I liked it! Good job. :D

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!

Wow, I really really loved this. You should make it into a song, it'd be really awesome lol. You're a very good writer!

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! Nah, I like my poems as poems but thanks for the suggestion! And I'm glad that you enjoyed it:)

WOW! great job! Need more be said!

L ♥

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha Ha aww thanks so much Lydia, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it:)

Damn, you're good! This is an amazing poem. It really speaks, and tells a lot about how someone could feel. Seriously, I feel like that sometimes. You know, masked behind everything. Great job.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah I feel that way a lot too. ( ha ha might explain why I wrote it....). But we all have different masks. We aren't anyone, nobody seems to know they are anymore. Thanks so much Marionette for reading and commenting:D

Everyone has masks. Some people have more than others. For some the mask creates intrigue, makes them seem more mysterious than they really are. For others, it's a protection, a shield, it hides their true self from the wolves of the world. But if they have that mask and that mask is unbreakable, when what are they? A fake? A lie? It's a real question that will probably never be answered.

Wonderful Zoe, I always love your updates, they bring wonderful insight to something most people don't think of. Your creativity is amazing.
~Kaori

Posted: Aug 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh thanks so much OHSHCKaori! I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much, and that i got you thinking. It's hard to say whether they're a fake or a lie, but that's a good thought. Ha Ha now you've made ME think! Thanks so much again:) You're comments are always so delightful for me to read.

(Rrr! The formatting was messed up when I read this. Don't know if you realised?) The poem though is fantastic! I loved every bit of it, but especially this stanza:

But one day he just can’t help himself,
And after the show opens the curtains,
And everyone in the audience turns to see,
The girl they thought was different.

Wonderful job with the poem.

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! I'm really glad that you liked that part of the poem, ha ha. And no! I didn't realize the formatting was messed up. Thanks for telling me, I'll try to fix that, Thanks so much again, and I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem:D

Well there's not much I can say that hasn't already been said lol. It was absolutely beautiful. It was wonderfully descriptive and emotional and how you worded it just..hit the mark I guess.
I am "irrevocably" in love with it lol. [♥][♥]

Keep it up, Zoe! :)

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha Ha Thanks so much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it MissAlice:) your comment has brightened my day.



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