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How Much I Miss You

Poem By: XBrokenHeartedX
Poetry


This is for my grandpa, because I miss him so much View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 31, 2008    Reads: 543    Comments: 35    Likes: 10   


    I cry those tears that lay upon the ground.

    Soaked in the carpet and there they are bound.

    More of them fall from my face.

    I wish that the past could be erased.

    I always feel lonely without you here.

    I wish that once again we could be near.  

    But you have vanished and I'm unfathomably sad.

    Your love was everything that I had.

    I miss you so much, I hope you can see.

    I miss you so much, so please come back to me.

    I miss you so much, so don't leave me alone.

    I miss you so much, but now I'm on my own.

    I don't want to forget but I don't want to remember.

    To me you were like a glowing ember.

    But then the glow faded and you were gone.

    And you come back to mind every dawn.

    I don't want to wake up if you're not there.

    I hate that you're dead because it's not fair.

    Why did He have to take you so soon?

    You were like a flower just about to bloom.

    I miss you so much, don't ever forget it.

    I miss you so much, let that light stay lit.

    I miss you so much, you're still in my heart.

    I miss you so much, I have from the start.

    I look up to you every single day.

    I follow your footsteps in every single way.

    Your features I remember more clearly than you know.

    And I loved you so much more than I could show.

    I don't want it to be the end.

    I want you back here again.

    But no matter how many times I've wished.

    You aren't coming back and that I can't dismiss.

    I miss you so much, I can't believe it's true.

    I miss you so much, you know I love you.

    I miss you so much, don't ever leave again.

    I miss you so much, you'll always be my best friend.

   

   


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Comments:

yonaika
(not registered user)

Awww!!! that's so niiice!! It sounds like a so though!
than again you did say your poems are like songs...
if you play in instrument you should add some music!! It would be perfect-er!

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh thanks! I meant for it to be a poem, but that does sound like a good idea; to make it into the song. Thanks for the idea, and for the wonderful comment! :)

Oh, I know the pain of losing and/or being seperated from a loved one. Yo could really feel the emotion put into this, and I felt like I could really connect to it. Great job. :D

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much mystory, I'm so glad that you liked it. Thanks so much for the wonderful comment:)

awww i almost cried reading this. ]:

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm sorry! But I'm glad you felt emotional, and thanks for the wonderful comment:)

awww oh my goodness this really touched me. fantastic poem. it brought tears to my eyes.

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad that you felt emotional. Actually, as I was writing this I cried. Usually when I think about my grandpa I cry:) But thanks so much for the wonderful comment, and I'm glad you liked it.

This gave me the shivers (not in a bad way but a good way^_^)!!!!!!! The poems that I've read so far from you, always seem to move me in a special way:). This poem kind've showed the terrible truth of loosing a great friend. It was like they were thinking of all the things their friend was to them... and all the special times they've had together... but they'll never be relived because that friend is gone! This reminded me of me and my friend^_^! It was so sweet and sensitive-- I loved it!

Lot's of special chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl.

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha Ha it was about my grandfather:) But I'm glad that you thought about you and your friend! It's about any loved one really, and I'm glad that you felt emotional. Thanks so much for the wonderful comment, and I'm happy you liked it.

You and Grandpa must have been close. I can empathize with what you're feeling but I wouldn't be able to sympathize because I have not lost anyone so close. You did a good job showing your emotions in this piece. I loved it! :)

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! We were close:) I'm glad that you liked it, and thanks for reading.

It's really, really, really a thousand times more reallys good. It shows real emotion and I can't believe how good it is. You also deserve another big huge hug. *big hug* there. I guess that's all I have to say...

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh thanks so much for this wonderful comment! I'm really glad that you liked it. *returns hug* thanks:)

Oh my lord! that was gorgeous!

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Why thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reading:]

XBrokenhearted a beautiful poem about someone you love and miss. But remember, your grandpa will always be close, only a thought away.

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah I understand that, though its hard not having him here in person. Thanks so much for the wonderful comment, and I'm glad you liked it:]

Awwh! This poem is so sad! You can really tell the pain you went through.. :( It's absolutely wonderful. Keep it up. I loved it.
Keep me posted!
xRAINBOWx

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh thanks so much! I'm really glad that you liked it, and thanks for the wonderful comment. I will definitely make sure to keep you posted:]

I can tell that you and your grandfather really got along well. I've lost so many people in my life already. Your poem made me remember them. Thank you. =)

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww your welcome:) Thanks so much for this wonderful comment. We did get along well, and it was hard to have him just leave. I'm glad that you liked it:]

this is beautiful- he would've loved it so much:) Enyo

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks:) I'm so glad that you liked it.

aww, this is sooo good!!! Such great emotion!! It's sad, and you expressed that and your love to your grandpa very well! Great writing, amazing as always! :)

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it, and that you thought I expressed the emotion well. I loved him so much, so I just wrote what I felt. Thanks for reading:]

Lionheart
(not registered user)

This was an emotional seasonin itself. A past time that i am not familiar with. I have never met my grandparents before, and only one is still alive and i dont even know his name...
I wish i could relate better but everytime i hear about one that died i feel nothing at all. I have lost a friend before, so i had that in mind. I made a promise to them and i have to keep it.
This was powerful with the emotions. I felt like i had a glimpse of what it was like, because i have no relatives as friends...

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh poor Lionheart! *big big big hug* That must be very sad for you. Me and my grandpa were very close, so it was hard to lose him. I'm also very sorry for you losing your friend:( I'm really glad that you still liked this, and that you caught a glimpse. Thanks so much for all your comments, they mean so much:)

Phenomenal. I enjoyed this piece dearly and you should really consider putting this in a contest or something.

Posted: Apr 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh thanks so much! I haven't really considered putting ANY of my work into a contest before, but I'll take your advice and maybe try. Thanks once again for the wonderful comment, and I'm glad you liked it:D

Great poem!! it reminds me of past times with my old girlfriend. i miss her. keep writing:D

Posted: Apr 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha Ha I'm glad that you got back memories. I'm really glad you liked it, and thanks for the comment.

Aw..This poem totally reminds me of my dead grandfather. We were close too. D:

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah me and my grandpa were really close, so it was hard to loose him. Sorry about your dead grandfather:( But the positive side is that every time somebody dies a new person is born. YAY^-^ Thanks for the great comment and I'm glad you liked it. (hopefully)

I like it

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'm glad you do like it. But what did you like about it? Thanks for the comments:D

again i say awesome poem i do free-write poems but i wish i could do that

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha Ha practice makes perfect! I've been writing since kindergarten, and it took me probably four to five years to find out how to write better like that. But I'm so glad that you liked it! Thanks for the wonderful comment:D

Your poetry delves right into the heart of human emotions and gives light and imagery to the human soul. You are brilliant, and that's that!

Posted: Apr 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh thanks again! It's so great that my poetry does that kind of stuff; it's a huge goal for writers. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks once again for the comment:)

That was brilliant! I don't know what else to say about it. It was so beautiful and touching and I really felt it. You know how when something interests you, yu kind of sit up a little taller, lean in a bit further to read it, that was how it was for me reading your poem. Loved it!

Posted: Apr 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes I know exactly the feeling! Ha Ha I'm so glad that it gave you that much interest. I'm so glad you liked it, and thanks for the wonderful comment:D

very very nice!! love it! it surely inspired me!! it feels like something i would say!! keep writing! feel free to read some of my poems...

Posted: Apr 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm really glad that it inspired you, and that you liked it. Thanks for reading, and I'll be sure to read some of your poems too:D

Tears came effortlessly.....

When my grandpa died of heart stroke, i was not there near me and he loved me the most , but he did visit me before leaving for heaven.
I could see him ....

it was so painful.

He always inspired me to be a doctor and he died when i was appearing for my Class 10th board exams. He could never see me as a doctor...and I vowed to be one for him
I know he is watching me and is happy....JUST LIKE YOUR GRANDPA who must be so proud of you

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks:) My grandpa was a singer, and I had always wanted to be a singer. But I never got to sing for him before he went, and so that made me feel so bad. We were just really close, and it hurts so much to lose somebody that you care so much about. I'm sorry about your grandfather too. I'm sure he's proud of you also:) Thanks again!

Sorry it was "near him when he died"//i got carried away, i guess

I liked this buddy.....

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha Ha don't worry I still understood what you meant. I'm so glad you liked it though, and thanks for all the wonderful comments on my poetry:D

People come and go and that's quite sad...
You may have lost one---
But his memories resonate through the passage of time. The echo that your words create makes me hear, even feel,what and how you feel. Your poem told me so...

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

I understand that, just so much pain comes from losing somebody that you love, especially the first time it happens because you just keep thinking "why them? why did they have to die? they were a good person". But I'm glad that you enjoyed this poem, and that you could feel the emotions that I put in there. Thank you so much:D

awww i did cry when reading this one i could so feel your pain and sadness i related to this thru the loss of my dad and the pain my daughters felt with the loss of their grandpa i certainly hope that time eases your pain :)

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you:) I'm glad that you could relate and that it got a reaction out of you. I'm also glad you enjoyed this, and I thank you again:D

This was excellent.I love your way of writng.I lost my grandfaether too.I was very yung.He adored me.He was all day with me.I dont really remamber,but he loved me.And he didnt live long to see my bro and sis.He only met me.I wish he is alive.Everything would be different.Again you write excellent.This poem was great great!!

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! Yeah my grandpa knew my sister and brother, and liked me because we were both singers. I never sang for him though, but I always knew he was proud of me. I never did though; he died a week after our last visit. It was really heartbreaking. Thanks again for commenting, it really means a lot:)

Nice work dear,it really sent a message across it reminds one of pains felt at d loss of a loved one and it is a really beautiful piece...kudos

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much:)

i havee to say the was really good

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

What did you think was really good about it? Thanks:)

hei
i really loved it...i guess i know how it feels to have lost someone you really love
keep on writing...good job :)

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah it's pretty hard, but I'm getting through it. Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I appreciate it:)

What a beautiful poem. Loss is a tough thing, but I think this covers it very well! I'm sorry about your grandpa, but I'm sure he still loves you very much, and he's probably very proud of your talent! :D

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much polkadotgirl! Your comment means a lot:) I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope my grandpa is proud too:D

Alicia Branson
(not registered user)

That was so sad but beautiful I know what its like to have some one you love so much vanish and you never see them again.really good I loved it.

Posted: Jul 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you could relate.

And now, I'm crying... It grabbed my heart. So deep, I love it. I'm jelous of the way you put all that emocion on all your poems. =P You're wonderful, and never stop writing. =]

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Well my inspiration for poetry are my emotions, because they're all from true experiences. So thanks! I'm glad that it affected you in a way:) Your comments are very much appreciated, thank you:D

that was really sad.U reminded me of my grandma who left me too soon and u made me wish for my grandpa i never saw and reading this i wish he was there too,atleast for me to miss him.

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the great comment, its sad to have someone leave when you never got to say goodbye.



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