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This is the first part to a three part series. I didn't know what I expected when I first clicked to read it, but afterwards I was so shocked. Alice Oiseau stuns me every time she writes a new poem. On these ones, I wanted to print them out and post them on my wall. Alice has the great talent of expressing her true emotions without any mistakes. I think that she tends to write better when she lets it all loose, and in writing this three part series (the first one) she had truly reached a magnificently new high level. This poem is truly one of the best poems I've ever read in my life. I believe it's even better than ones that professionals have written. View table of contents...

 

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