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Not An Angel

Poem By: XBrokenHeartedX
Poetry


I love you.
I do not know if you feel the same.
I want to be your guardian angel.
But no matter how hard I try.
I'm not.
I can't.
I never can be. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 5, 2008    Reads: 350    Comments: 14    Likes: 4   


    Dusk enters into day,

    Extinguishing all light.

    And there your body lays,

    Quiet and unmoving.

                   .

    Your beautiful eyes brighter than any moon,

    Your smile warmer than any sun.

    I dream of you every night,

    In an everlasting untouched utopia.

                   .

    This despondent hope of mine,

    Fails every time you walk past without a word.

    And I'm left with only the smell of your hair,

    And the sad eyes watching you fade in the distance.

                   .

    My love for you could never be taken away,

    No food or drink could ever replenish the feelings that I have for you.

    This love is like a malady,

    And there is no cure.

                   .

    Your benevolent personality takes me away,

    And I spread my wings to fly.

    But I have no wings,

    And so I stay.

                .

    I inhale you like my oxygen,

    And when I see you there is nobody else.

    And when I exhale,

    You are gone.

                .

    I wish to protect you,

    To take you away from evil's barrier.

    I wish for you to come away with me,

    And leave behind everything for something new.

                 .

    If only I had the wings of an angel,

    I could take you up on my wings and fly off.

    And if you would come with me,

    We would soar forever in the heavens.

                    .

    But I am no angel,

    These wings are not made of beautiful feathers.

    But of stone and rock,

    That hold me away from you and your open heart.

                   .

    If I could be your guardian angel,

    I would watch over you endlessly.

    If I were an angel,

    I would keep your love always.

                  .

    But I am no angel,

    This heart of mine is not made of stone and rock.

    But out of stitches and dried blood,

    From losing you when I could have held onto you.

                .

    I am no guardian angel.

    I am no angel.

    I have no heart of gold.

    But I still love you.


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Comments:

AWWW How cute! It's beautiful!! I knew I had the right idea to stop doing homework and check out your stuff. YAY!!!

Anywho, it really is wonderful, it's got so much emotion in it.

~Kaori

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha Ha oooooo. It's ok I do it all the time! LOL thanks so much, I'm so glad you liked it. :D

aweee I LOVE YOUUU!!

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha Ha I love you too! Thanks so much for this comment, I'm glad you liked it:D

Oooooooo........Sooooooo sweet,and yet sad.I liked this poem very much,sooo great.I wish you could be an angel,and guard your love with your wings. :).Its sad when you cant come near to the person you love.

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, I know that feeling. It's really hard to accept that kind of thing. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reading and commenting:)

awwwww so heart touching *tear falls down cheek* its very sweet with a sense of sadness. I liked it

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww thank you:) I'm glad it got a reaction out of you, and I'm happy you enjoyed it.

LOVE the poem! wow girl, you have some serious writting talent! ever published??

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Nope, ha ha, I've never been published before. But thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

dude awesomest poem ever i say your poem should be in the top 5!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow! Thank you so much! That's one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me:)

ohh srry i mean dudet
but do u mind if i put this up on my gaia account

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL, I really don't mind

WOW! :) Fantastic. It's a beautiful sad poem. I loved it! :)

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it:)

L.O.V.E.D it!!!

FANTABULOUS!!
I really enjoyed reading this, though it was sad...:)

And I can relate myself to this too...You have done a great job in this one!!XD

Take care always!!^_^

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha Ha thanks so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, and that you could relate; it makes it much better. Thanks again:D

Simply amazing...
I like your subjects...

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem:)

OH.MY.GOD

Words can not express how much i relate to this! I ♥ it.

Not even joking.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow! Thank you so much! :)

Your work.. is amazing! I love everything about this. The stories they hold inside... I mean, WOW! Your great, I just wish for a book from your side, you will be such a famous writer someday. =]]] I'm your biggest fan!! =]=P

This love is like a malady, And there is no cure.

Yeah, I know the kind. :D

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha HA oh thanks so much! Wow, well I am working on a book...not one of poems but I am hoping to get it published someday. Thanks, your comment really means a lot:D

hey liked this one

But I am no angel,
This heart of mine is not made of stone and rock.
But out of stitches and dried blood,
From losing you when I could have held onto you.

great feeling in there .................nice one keep it up

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much!

Awesome love poetry.
You showed feelings,and meanings.
Good writing, I liked it.
You got me interested,and that makes
for good writing.Great job.Keep up
the good work....[angellynn]

Posted: Oct 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed the poem:) I appreciate you reading and commenting.



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