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Gosh I can't even tell you how great this poem was. Practically perfect in my eyes, no mistakes that I could see. The emotion she puts into her poem is like a tidal wave that keeps coming back. Her rhyme scheme wasn't forced at all, and it flows from beginning to end. You'll be hooked. View table of contents...

 

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