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Those Unspoken Words

Poem By: XBrokenHeartedX
Poetry


This is another piece, that I actually wrote yesterday at Hugo House camp. These people called Youth Speaks came to visit us, and it was really cool because the guys were super funny and really fun. But anyways, they had us use a prompt about love (there was another complicated one but I didn't get it ha ha). View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 1, 2008    Reads: 61    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


    Lies that are spoken from loved ones mouths,

    Seems to be all there is anymore.

    And this unrequited love,

    Burns me in the pit of my soul.

    There is no love,

    But a flower yet to be blossomed,

    A story yet to be told,

    But no paper to tell it on,

    And no love to keep it growing.

    No words, spoken.

    And yet it lives on, this world,

    Even though we are broken.

    Because beneath those lies is love,

    A love stronger than the lies that it is bound to,

    A love deeper than the ocean who's waves crash with no sound.

    And it is always there, waiting,

    As the story moves forward,

    As the flower blooms on,

    It is there, waiting.

    Waiting for the moon and the stars to say their goodbyes,

    Waiting for the sun to kiss you on your forehead good morning,

    Because it is love,

    And love itself, rules the world.


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Comments:

Wow. This one made me think!! -and that's a very rare thing to be sure- Strange how often times, a person lies only because they love another person so much that they would rather be gone from the face of the earth than hurt that person. Isn't it strange that most lies are told out of love and not hate or malice, but merely compassion.
Wow, that made me think!!! Hugo House must be a pretty good program/camp to have helped you create this one.
~Kaori

Posted: Aug 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha Ha well it wasn't that good...but yeah, it did teach me a few things lol:) I'm glad it made you think! And exactly, so many lies are spoken from love than from hate. I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much, and thanks a lot OHSHCKaori:)

i like!!
=]
its deep[in my opinion] and really truthful, cos the parts where you say
"Because beneath those lies is love,

A love stronger than the lies that it is bound to,

A love deeper than the ocean who's waves crash with no sound." is ssoooo true!
i also like the structure and the words you used =] *grins*
hehe take care ^^

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! HaHa I'm glad that you enjoyed it:D

"a story to be told but no paper to tell it on"
--cant even begin to say how much i love this line. it stuck with me throughout the whole poem. excellent poem here zoe! i love your endings to your poems. they always leave me with a smile of deep pondering ^^ wonderful writing hon!

Posted: Oct 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Awesome! Punishment has told me that before, that I'm good at endings. YAY! I'm glad:) Thanks so much Alice:D I'm glad that you enjoyed that line too, haha.



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