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Another Poem I wrote thanks to Angie, during my Writer's Block Days. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 1, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 3    Likes: 3   


All my life you've guided me,
Through every obstacle one could confront,
I learned to trust you,
Admire you,
Even grow to love you.
Why then did you leave me here,
On the side of an abandoned road?
Let to rot and suffer,
Without your love,
Your touch,
Your consolation.
I did all I ever could to please you.
I worked long and hard,
Did as I was told,
But you never really took notice.
Why did you leave me here?
I still don't understand.
Was it because I was fragile,
A burden to you?
I am lost,
Abandoned,
Broken.
I can't seem to manage on my own.
If I try to stand,
I fall back down.
I've endured so much in my young life,
And I'd do anything to get back on my feet;
But there still remains one question:
Do I dare fly with broken wings?


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Comments:

You wrote this while having writer's block? You can't tell. It's really good :)

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!

Lol. I didn't think it would turn out this good. Oops sorry. :) I LOVE it!!

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

-.- Thanks again...

wow, this is touching. i'm going back to reread it a couple more times now
:]

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

:) Thanks



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