you were there for me and here go you

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Poem By: XnewtX
Poetry

Tags: friends, friend ship, cut, cutting, life, death, power

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Submitted: May 19, 2008 Reads: 50 Comments: 3 Likes: 1

when you cut
you are cutting me aswell
i feel your pain

you was there for me
and now im here to return the favor
you mean so much to me
really you do
but you don't know it

i wish i could be there to comfort you
to be there to help you in person
really i do

thanks for reading

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Comments:

Trainman238

awwwww this is such a sweet poem!

Posted: May 19, 2008

XBrokenHeartedX

Such a sweet short poem! Whichever friend this is for, they would really like it. You had a few typo mistakes in the beginning, but other than that it was really nice. You showed good emotion, especially in the first stanza. "When you cut yourself you're cutting me as well." I REALLY liked that part. Great piece! I can't wait to read more:)

Posted: Jun 2, 2008