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Do you see her?

Poem By: xOverdoseXAddictionx
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


She sits in her corner,
Crying her heart out,
Yelling at the silence,
Listening to the night shout

She breathes the air
And Sees the pain
No one is there
She's alone in this game

She can not stand
For she is to weak
She can not smile
And she doesn't speak

She has been beaten
And her body is bruised
But she won't back down
Because she has been used

She's scared to love
And scared of what people think
She tries not to give up
But hurtful words are all they speak

She wants her body to bleed
And release the pain she holds inside
In her mind, she sings
And does her best to hide

Do you see her?
Can't you tell it's me?


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Comments:

I love it.... even though its full of sorrow and depression still a good piece of writing

WOW.... your a great writer it would be honor if you would check my new work out and leave me comments u got trememdous talent and i'd love to hear from you !!

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

hey
thx
ive been writeing for like 1 or 2 years now
and thats basically how all of my poems are, full of sorrow and depression. but thx
and yea, ill check out some of your work =p

This was really good. I admittedly love depressing poems because they're always packed with emotion(the good ones, anyway, and your's is a good one) WELL DONE!!

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

lol
yes i like em too
and thx
ill try and put more up soon

wow! Amazing. I really felt the scared emotions. Great Job! :)

Posted: Jun 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thx
its a true poem



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