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Why don't you want me?

Poem By: xOverdoseXAddictionx
Poetry


The sequal to "unspoken feelings" because now the guy i wrote that about, knows how i feel. and he doesnt feel the same. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 2, 2008    Reads: 26    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Am I not pretty enough?

Am I not what your looking for?

Should I go ahead and give up?

Should I flirt more?

I know you love her

And it kills me so

I dont know what to do

Should I hide my feelings from you?

If I gave you time

Would you come around?

If you saw me cry

Would you change your mind?

I know we're not ment to be

But I want us to be

Is there something wrong with me?

I need you to see

I can't stop feeling this way

Never in my life

I can't think of what to say,

I'll just cry all night

Why does it hurt?

That you dont feel the same

I'm standing here dieing,

Out in the pouring rain

Why don't you care?

Don't you see?

I act like her...

So why don't you want me?


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Comments:

This was really good. In this one-as well as the first one-I could really feel your pain. You're really good at writing emotions into your poetry. I admire that. Good job. and i'm sorry about your whole situation-that sucks. But at least you can vent through writing. Terrible pain leads to wonderful poetry.

Posted: Jul 3, 2008



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