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This is in response to xxemoxbfsxx challenge..
a poem based aroung a list of words..

1. entrancing
2. augment
3. atheist
4. cantata
5. retraction
6. jersey
7. collimate
8. photograph
9. auspicious
10. dominant

enjoy.. xoxox View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 16, 2008    Reads: 62    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


They say opposites attract
i will never agree with this

sometimes thereare too many differences,so attraction is impossible.

I am a woman
He is a man

I brush down long blond hair
He runs fingers through short, brunntte curls

I see through light blue eyes, encased in a pale ivory frame
He narrows dark, almost black entrancing eyes, set in a olive, tanned casing

I attend services, prayer sessionsand evencomposed a cantata
He is an atheist, not intrested in changing

I am a working class girl,earning minimum wage
his salary, already twicemine,is augmented by a weekly allowance from daddy

I suffer from mild OCD causing me to collimate all stationary on my desk
He is sickeningly dis - organised.

I treasure photographs
He collects jerseys.

I am oftenfaced withless than auspiscious circumstances
He seems to be blessed with endless good fortune

I get paid to serve him coffees
He gets money to sit at a desk demanding retractions

I am submissive in our bed
He is the dominant one, but i prefer it this way.

Sometimes thereare too many differences, and attractionis inevitable

They say opposites attract
and i have come to agree with this


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Comments:

hah. that is so cool. i didn't know how this was gonna turn out cus i gave you very odd words.

Lydia_xxxx

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

yay!x!..
tnx.. i wasn't sure how it ws gonna turn out either.. with words like collimate.. and cantata!x!.. xlolx..
nehoo.. it was soo much fun!.. lemme know if u av anymor challenges..
xoxoxox

it was ok, but I don't really feel it had much of a flow.
Good try!!

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

haha... yeh i ws focusing more on fitting all the words i was given..
most of it made no sense really..
xoxoxoxox

Those were hard words, good job!

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

aaw..
tnkoo..
i kno it's notvery flowing.. but i did the best i cud soo... i'm glad yooh like it!x!..
xox

hi! daisy. so, eventually, u've come to appreciate the differences for that's what makes life easier. let's cheer that and hoping u remain a TWOSOME ever. for life is happier two-two, never mind the differences. or shall i say, let's celebrate the differences.

honey, they r like spice in an otherwise staid life. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

haha...
yep yooh understood it completely...

xox tnx 4 reading! xox..

xox



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