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Submitted: Feb 26, 2008 Reads: 38 Comments: 3 Likes: 3
Because, because, because,
I love her that's why
Because, because, because
she makes my heart fly
Because, because, because
for her, I would die
because, because, because
seeing her hurt makes me cry
Because, because, because
my heart's all broke and sad
that is why
I always try to make her glad
and never ever mad
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I don't think you write too much poetry. :) I love how you take you're own feeling and turn them into something worthy that you should proud of. Great job!
Posted: Feb 29, 2008
Sounds like you have a real heart, that’s very admirable these day’s! I enjoyed it a lot! ;) ~ Nixie
Posted: Feb 29, 2008
Poetry is good, Don't ever stop writing it.
I loved this a lot!
Posted: Mar 24, 2008
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